Showing posts with label Psychological Thriller. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Psychological Thriller. Show all posts

Kill For Me, Kill For You by Steve Cavanagh

 


Our Rating 5⭐
401 Pages
First published 2023
You Can Find Out More About Steve Cavanagh...here

  • The Blurb...
One dark evening in New York City, two strangers meet by chance.
Over drinks, Amanda and Wendy realise they have so much in common.

They both feel alone. They both drink alone.
And they both desperately want revenge against the two men who destroyed their families.

Together, they have the perfect plan.
If you kill for me, I'll kill for you...
  • Our Review...
A standalone by Ireland's answer to John Grisham. Obviously heavily influenced by Patricia Highsmith's Strangers On A Train, (which we have also reviewed.) Cavanagh does a bang up job of updating and twistifying ( adding more twists!) to the original. The original's plot still stands up but it does feel very dated now. Cavangh's updated plot is slightly more complex but doesn't feel forced. It's not twists for twists sake. I started reading unconciously just expecting a rerun of the original but with modern day language and sensibilities. This would have been a worthwhile enterprise on it's own but the deciously dark corruption of the plot is just a juicy bonus. There are a couple of cracking twists. I read a few other books at the time I read this and this is the one that stays with me. If you loved the original, or even if you didn't this is well worth a read.
  • Selected Quotes...
That kind of death didn’t ride alone. It brought more dark horsemen with it: unemployment, debt, addiction and pain that at times was too great to bear.”

“In any other world that meant he would lose his job—but not when his father owned the company. Some people, those with money and the ear of power, never pay for their crimes the way ordinary people do.”

“Stronger than lover’s love is lover’s hate. Incurable”

  • If You Liked This Then You May Like...

The One by John Marrs

The Talented Mr Ripley by Patricia Highsmith

Look Closer by David Ellis.

Dark Side by Belinda Bauer



437 Pages: First Published 2011
Our Rating 4.5⭐s
You can find out more about Belinda Bauer...Here

  • The Blurb...
THE QUESTION IS: WHO IS HUNTING WHO?

In a small village where no stranger goes unnoticed, a local woman has been murdered in her bed.

This is PC Jonas Holly's first murder investigation. But he is distracted by anonymous messages that seem to come from the killer . . .

Is Jonas going to be able to solve the crime, whilst being taunted by a psychopath?
  • Our Review...
Regular visitors to this site (if there are any...) will know that we love a Belinda Bauer novel, and have reviewed a few here. (see reviews by author) and Dark Side is another brilliant addition to the cannon, albeit I am 15 years late to the party with this one. 

In the sleepy little village  of Shipcott on Exmoor nothing happens, nothing changes until the day it does. A paralysed old lady is murdered and the village bobby Jonas Holly ( played in my head inexplicably by Jimmy Carr, but a nice version) is powerless to help protect his people.  The killer begins to leave cryptic notes for Jonas as the out of town, bid city detective swoops in with his entourage. The Detective inappropriately named Detective Marvel is a crude, opinionated bully. Think Gene Hunt from "Life on Mars" and you would be about right. He disrespects Jonas. More kiliings of people deemed a burden on society happen. Jonas tries to help the investigation but he also needs to care for his disabled wife. In addition The dark history of the seemingly idyllic village resonates throughout the investigation.  

So the scene is set for the hunt for the killer. 

Belinda Bauer is a very gifted writer. She can create compelling, deep and dark characters that are nuanced and multilayered. However the real genius is in mixing very dark, very relevant humour to situations that shouldn't be humorous to the average sensibility. I realise she is a crime writer and as such death is something that happens in her stories but she takes the emotional baggage of death and right and wrong and moulds them into a challenging, emotional atmosphere that envelopes the narrative and demands debate. This is true for the other novels of hers that I have read namely Rubbernecker, Blacklands, Snap and Exit. To simplify she blends dark characters, dark humour and death into a wonderful thought provoking story. Often in the end nobody wins. A bit like real life then?


  • Selected Quotes...
Margaret Priddy awoke to the brilliant beam of light she had been anticipating with fear and longing for years. Finally, she thought, I’m dying.

Jonas understood how almost everything important happens underneath, and away from public view – that signage and medals and headlines are just the tip of the village iceberg, and that real life is shaped long before and far below the surface in the blue-black depths of the community ocean.

She had always liked horror films. As a teenager they had just been a way to allow a boy to put his arm around her at the movies without feeling as though she was being a slut.

Marvel watched the empty ribbon of tarmac lined by dirty brown moor race at them out of blackness and disappear as soon as the lights had passed over it. It was like travelling through space, or a lower intestine.

She’d pat his hand and look into the past, which was somewhere over his left shoulder.

Robert Springer was both an ardent horseman and an ardent smoker – two hobbies that Marvel gathered should be kept apart, like wives and girlfriends.

the police grapevine had whispered of Marvel squeezing the facts to make them fit a suspect – or squeezing that suspect to make him fit the facts.

It made him think of his nan sellotaping names to her nick-nacks, so they’d all know who was getting what when she died.

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Strangers On A Train by Patricia Highsmith


Rating 3.5⭐s

You can buy Strangers On A Train...here
You can read an article on Patricia Highsmith...here

The Blurb...
The psychologists would call it folie a deux . . .

'Bruno slammed his palms together. "Hey! Cheeses, what an idea! I kill your wife and you kill my father! We meet on a train, see, and nobody knows we know each other! Perfect alibis! Catch?'''

Guy Haines and Charles Anthony Bruno are passengers on the same train. Haines is a successful architect in the midst of a divorce, Bruno a mysterious smooth-talker with a sadistic proposal: he'll murder Haines's wife if Haines will murder Bruno's father. As Bruno carries out his twisted plan, Guy finds himself trapped in Highsmith's perilous world, where, under the right circumstances, ordinary people are capable of extraordinary crimes. From this moment, almost against his conscious will, he is trapped in a nightmare of shared guilt and an insidious merging of personalities.


Our Review...
The initial concept for the novel is both intriguing and disturbing. If you met a total stranger on a train and decided to swap murder victims could you get away with it? After reading this book I think the answer is yes! with one giant proviso. You must not have any contact after your initial meeting with your murderous conspirator. Alas this does not happen here. The entitled and probably deluded Bruno immediately takes care of his side of the bargain. However the more rational Guy thinks it was all just talk, a bit of fun. The problem now is Guy cannot go to the police as they will see it very differently . He believes that they will see it as "more or less put a hit on his ex wife." Added to this quandary is the fact that Bruno is waiting for Guy to hold up his end the bargain. Bruno begins to pressure Guy into compliance all the while Bruno is becoming slowly obsessed by Guy..

Its at this stage where the two main themes come to play. Firstly the author examines the very human condition of guilt. ( see selected quotes) It wears heavy on Guy driving him down and down. If he confessed then perhaps he wouldn't feel the massive weight of remorse. Is the wretched  guilt of human conscience greater than the guilt awarded by a court of law.? While fascinating I have read this trope a few times before notably in Crime and Punishment and The Secret History. It seems a little odd that in a pre planned murder the angst of guilt should come after the action and not between decision to kill and the action of killing. In the three novels mentioned I think The Secret History's examination of guilt (albeit a group examination) is more realistic as the death isn't planned, so there no time for guilt before the death. 

Secondly the author examines man's duality (see selected quotes). Not good v evil as this is too simplistic as it conjures images of opposing sides ala Jekyll & Hide. The author suggests that opposites are not in fact opposites but sit together perfectly in the same same space. A homogenous inseparable mixture. This is reflected in the characters of Bruno and Guy who both simultaneously hate and like (possibly love?) each other. Two parts of the same whole.

It is very of its time and place. 1950s, wealthy USA. The language and culture can make the narrative seem a little dated. I think it is due an update for TV say modern, working class UK, or intercontinental could be an interesting scenario.

All in all an interesting read and I can see why it has become a modern classic.


Selected Quotes...

“People, feelings, everything! Double! Two people in each person. There's also a person exactly the opposite of you, like the unseen part of you, somewhere in the world, and he waits in ambush.”

The tragedy was not even the first drink, because the first drink was not the first resort but the last. There’d had to be first the failure of everything else

“Society's law was lax compared to the law of conscience”

“I tell him his business, all business, is legalized throat-cutting, like marriage is legalized fornication.”



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Crime & Punishment by Fyodor Dostoevsky
The Secret  History  by Donna Tartt 
Brighton Rock by Graham Greene


About The Author...


Patricia Highsmith was an American novelist who is known mainly for her psychological crime thrillers which have led to more than two dozen film adaptations over the years.


She lived with her grandmother, mother and later step-father (her mother divorced her natural father six months before 'Patsy' was born and married Stanley Highsmith) in Fort Worth before moving with her parents to New York in 1927 but returned to live with her grandmother for a year in 1933. Returning to her parents in New York, she attended public schools in New York City and later graduated from Barnard College in 1942.

Shortly after graduation her short story 'The Heroine' was published in the Harper's Bazaar magazine and it was selected as one of the 22 best stories that appeared in American magazines in 1945 and it won the O Henry award for short stories in 1946. She continued to write short stories, many of them comic book stories, and regularly earned herself a weekly $55 pay-check. During this period of her life she lived variously in New York and Mexico.

Her first suspense novel 'Strangers on a Train' published in 1950 was an immediate success with public and critics alike. The novel has been adapted for the screen three times, most notably by Alfred Hitchcock in 1951.

In 1955 her anti-hero Tom Ripley appeared in the splendid 'The Talented Mr Ripley', a book that was awarded the Grand Prix de Litterature Policiere as the best foreign mystery novel translated into French in 1957. This book, too, has been the subject of a number of film versions. Ripley appeared again in 'Ripley Under Ground' in 1970, in 'Ripley's Game' in 1974, 'The boy who Followed Ripley' in 1980 and in 'Ripley Under Water' in 1991.

Along with her acclaimed series about Ripley, she wrote 22 novels and eight short story collections plus many other short stories, often macabre, satirical or tinged with black humour. She also wrote one novel, non-mystery, under the name Claire Morgan , plus a work of non-fiction 'Plotting and Writing Suspense Fiction' and a co-written book of children's verse, 'Miranda the Panda Is on the Veranda'.

She latterly lived in England and France and was more popular in England than in her native United States. Her novel 'Deep Water', 1957, was called by the Sunday Times one of the "most brilliant analyses of psychosis in America" and Julian Symons once wrote of her "Miss Highsmith is the writer who fuses character and plot most successfully ... the most important crime novelist at present in practice." In addition, Michael Dirda observed "Europeans honoured her as a psychological novelist, part of an existentialist tradition represented by her own favorite writers, in particular Dostoevsky, Conrad, Kafka, Gide, and Camus."

She died of leukemia in Locarno, Switzerland on 4 February 1995 and her last novel, 'Small g: a Summer Idyll', was published posthumously a month later.

Gerry Wolstenholme
July 2010

The Haunting Of Hill House by Shirley Jackson

 


Rating 4⭐ 
206 pages
You can buy The Haunting Of Hill House...here

  • The Blurb...
First published in 1959, Shirley Jackson's The Haunting of Hill House has been hailed as a perfect work of unnerving terror. It is the story of four seekers who arrive at a notoriously unfriendly pile called Hill House: Dr. Montague, an occult scholar looking for solid evidence of a 'haunting'; Theodora, his lighthearted assistant; Eleanor, a friendless, fragile young woman well acquainted with poltergeists; and Luke, the future heir of Hill House. At first, their stay seems destined to be merely a spooky encounter with inexplicable phenomena. But Hill House is gathering its powers - and soon it will choose one of them to make its own.

  • Our Review...
THOHH is considered to be one of the cornerstones or horror writing and you can see why. Seen through the eyes of Eleanor a young, vulnerable, innocent soul. The story shows how such a naïve, blank canvas of a person can be targeted by more powerful and dark influences. If this scenario is true with people in life, perhaps it can be true with otherwordly spirits interacting with the human world.

While reading this novel you may think to yourself that the tropes here are well worn and have become a bit of a cliché. That may be true but this is the tale that began a lot of the tropes as this was written in the 1950s, way before the Overlook hotel drove Jack Torrence bonkers in The Shining. As the novel was written in the 50s some of the interaction between the characters, especially Eleanor and Theodora, must seem a little dated to our ears.

The four guests settle in to the house and initially Eleanor and Theodora hit it ,off right away becoming firm friends. I have seen other reviews suggest there is an air of lesbian romance between the two. Personally I didn't pick that up but I'm a grumpy old man so not my area really. As the house sets its sights on Eleanor their friendship unravels under the intensity.

Despite being given the history of the house we are never quite sure whether the house is haunted by dead spirits or if the house itself is an evil entity. Eleanor herself drawn to the only place she has felt wanted. At the shocking conclusion we are left wondering whether the things that occur are the result of paranormal activity or mental illness. Or in the thin line between the two, could paranormal activity induce mental illness. Indeed which is more terrifying is a question the reader will inadvertently ask themselves subconsciously. It will certainly make you think.   

  • Selected Quotes...

the gate was so clearly locked—locked and double-locked and chained and barred; who, she wondered, wants so badly to get in?—she made no attempt to get out of her car, but pressed the horn, and the trees and the gate shuddered and withdrew slightly from the sound.

I am like a small creature swallowed whole by a monster, she thought, and the monster feels my tiny little movements inside.

She watched them, seeing their apprehensive faces, wondering at the uneasiness which lay so close below the surface in all of them, so that each of them seemed always waiting for a cry for help from one of the others; intelligence and understanding are really no protection at all,

‘Nothing in this house moves,’ Eleanor said, ‘until you look away, and then you just catch something from the corner of your eye.


  • If You Liked This Then You May Like...
The Exorcist by William Peter Blatty
The Turn Of The Screw by Henry James
The Shining by Steven King

  • About The Author

Shirley Jackson was an influential American author. A popular writer in her time, her work has received increasing attention from literary critics in recent years. She has influenced such writers as Stephen King, Nigel Kneale, and Richard Matheson.

She is best known for her dystopian short story, "The Lottery" (1948), which suggests there is a deeply unsettling underside to bucolic, smalltown America. In her critical biography of Shirley Jackson, Lenemaja Friedman notes that when Shirley Jackson's story "The Lottery" was published in the June 28, 1948, issue of The New Yorker, it received a response that "no New Yorker story had ever received." Hundreds of letters poured in that were characterized by, as Jackson put it, "bewilderment, speculation and old-fashioned abuse."

Jackson's husband, the literary critic Stanley Edgar Hyman, wrote in his preface to a posthumous anthology of her work that "she consistently refused to be interviewed, to explain or promote her work in any fashion, or to take public stands and be the pundit of the Sunday supplements. She believed that her books would speak for her clearly enough over the years." Hyman insisted the darker aspects of Jackson's works were not, as some critics claimed, the product of "personal, even neurotic, fantasies", but that Jackson intended, as "a sensitive and faithful anatomy of our times, fitting symbols for our distressing world of the concentration camp and the Bomb", to mirror humanity's Cold War-era fears. Jackson may even have taken pleasure in the subversive impact of her work, as revealed by Hyman's statement that she "was always proud that the Union of South Africa banned The Lottery', and she felt that they at least understood the story".

In 1965, Jackson died of heart failure in her sleep, at her home in North Bennington Vermont, at the age of 48.

My Absolute Darling by Gabriel Tallent

 

Rating 4⭐s

433 pages

You can buy My Absolute Darling...here

You can find out more about Gabriel Talent...here

  • The Blurb...

‘You think you’re invincible. You think you won’t ever miss. We need to put the fear on you. You need to surrender yourself to death before you ever begin, and accept your life as a state of grace, and then and only then will you be good enough.’

At 14, Turtle Alveston knows the use of every gun on her wall;
That chaos is coming and only the strong will survive it;
That her daddy loves her more than anything else in this world.
And he’ll do whatever it takes to keep her with him.

She doesn’t know why she feels so different from the other girls at school;
Why the line between love and pain can be so hard to see;
Why making a friend may be the bravest and most terrifying thing she has ever done
And what her daddy will do when he finds out …

Sometimes strength is not the same as courage.
Sometimes leaving is not the only way to escape.
Sometimes surviving isn't enough.


  • Our Review...
I read this book as part of the 52 books in 52 days challenge. For more on this challenge click here. This weeks prompt was a book with a yellow spine. This book was suggested to me by Mark Lowes author of Dandelion ( See If You Like This Then You May Like..)

At the start of this book you may take a little while to work out who the protagonist is as she goes by no less than four names. Her father calls her Kibble (which I had to look up,  is an American word for dry dog food! fancy calling your kid dog food!) Her grandfather calls her sweatpea (which seems a whole lot nicer.) She calls herself Turtle but her actual name is Julia. Once you have worked this out you're off and running.

This is a very dark and disturbing book. If any book should have trigger warnings this is it. Turtle is a 14 year old girl. Her father is a "prepper" preparing for a future apocalypse. He is a big violent man who hates society. Yet he is no ignorant red neck though. He is well read especially on philosophy. He seems to me a similar character to the Judge in Cormac McCarthy's Blood Meridian although less inclined into social contact with others than the judge.

Turtle, although semi-feral, has been trained in survival techniques including tracking and the use of guns by her father. Together, they live in an isolated, run-down, ramshackle, old farmhouse where the only clean things are the numerous guns. 

Turtle cannot settle into school and as she hits puberty the relationship between her and her father deteriorates from the unusual to the downright toxic. Her father constantly bullies her and allows her no contact with anyone except her aged grandfather and even this is given grudgingly. Yet father and daughter love each other right up to the edge of creepiness. But as turtle begins to bloom into a young woman, and meets boys, she begins to see the wider world and edge away from her father's influence and in so doing their relationship takes a turn for the worse. He becomes violent to her and sexually abuses her. This is dark enough, but is seen in other books. The thing that threw me and this is why this book is the darkest that I have ever read is in her response. She seemed, to a degree,  to enjoy the abuse or more specifically the intense attention. And for this she hates herself. This confliction twists her soul. Things come to a head when her father brings home a young homeless child. Turtle can see the pattern will repeat itself. She could possibly live with being a victim, but could she live with herself, allowing a child to be the next victim. Eventually she realises something must change and when that change comes it's going to be horrific.

While the subject matter just feels wrong and dirty the prose does an excellent of portraying Turtle's inner conflict and the love/hate relationship with her abuser. Ultimately it is her about her battle to break free from her father not just physically but more importantly psychologically.

This book will stay with you long after you have finished reading it. 

  • Selected Quotes...

in the end, that’s what life will ask of you. Not technical mastery, but ruthlessness, courage, and singularity of purpose.

It’s horseshit, and it’s no way to raise a child, pretending that the world is going to end, just because you’d prefer it did.”

Nothing is as difficult as a sustained and unremitting contact with your own mind.

She strips and cleans the Sig Sauer by the light of the oil lamp. She taps the magazine in and racks the slide and puts the gun to her temple just to remind herself that she is never so trapped that she cannot escape.

  • If You Liked This Then You May Like...
Dandelion by Mark Lowes. (click here for our review)
All The Wonderful Ugly Things by Bryn Greenwood.
To Rise Again At A Decent Hour by Joshua Ferris
  • About The Author


Gabriel Tallent was born in New Mexico and raised on the Mendocino coast by two mothers. He received his B.A. from Willamette University in 2010, and after graduation spent two seasons leading youth trail crews in the backcountry of the Pacific Northwest. Tallent lives in Salt Lake City.


Different Class by Joanne Harris



514 pages
Rating 3.⭐s
You can buy Different Class...here
You can follow Joanne Harris...here

  • The Blurb...
After thirty years at St Oswald's Grammar in North Yorkshire, Latin master Roy Straitley has seen all kinds of boys come and go - the clowns, the rebels, the underdogs, and those he calls his Brodie boys. But every so often there's a boy who doesn't fit the mould. A troublemaker. A boy capable of twisting everything around him. A boy with hidden shadows inside.

With insolvency and academic failure looming, a new broom has arrived at the venerable school, bringing Powerpoint, sharp suits and even sixth form girls to the dusty corridors. But while Straitley does his sardonic best to resist this march to the future, a shadow from his past is stirring. 
A boy who even twenty years on haunts his teacher's dreams. A boy capable of bad things.

  • Our Review...
I read this book as part of the 52 books in 52 weeks challenge. For details click  here. The prompt for this weeks book was a revenge story.

Roy Straightly is an old latin master in a public school. For any readers outside the UK, a public school is actually a private, fee paying school.. I think they are called "public" (which they are definitely not) as part of a camouflage exercise to ensure outrage at their existence, and potential to be taxed is kept to a minimum. 

Anyway, I digress, back to the review  Roy is an archaic man in an archaic institution that is on the verge of collapsing into the abyss.. Onto this sinking ship is parachuted a pilot (I know, I'm mixing metaphors but what the heck!) in the form of crisis head John Harrington. He plans to modernise the school with paperless office, shiny new health and safety policies, customer focus and actually letting girls into the school. 

Roy is horrified and vows to fight the young upstart all the way, especially as Roy knows the new headmaster is a wrong 'un. The new head is a former pupil who, twenty years before, was part of a scandal that resulted in Roy's friend and fellow teacher, Harry Clarke jailed for sexual abuse of a minor and murder. So the battle lines are drawn.

The novel is written in alternating timelines 1980s and 2005. Both timelines are written in the first person. One viewpoint is from Roy's perspective the other is from a child only known as ziggy, who is writing to his diary. It's a clever method of getting in both protagonist and antagonists heads and follow their life experiences and to see why they are who they are. We are also drawn into the day to day running of the school and the characters of other masters and children. 

There is humour in the story but as befits the subject matter it is at times a dark book but never overly descriptive of the sexual abuse. The public school setting is a fairly unique one. You have power, privilege, money, innocence, depravity and to a large extent detachment from the real world. It is scary that these institutions produce our political leaders.

Roy is a sort of Mr Chips character who has devoted his life to the school for 30+ years. No wife or children, who never really felt attached to his now dead parents. He seems to me a strange a-sexual character. The story follows the increasing battle intensity between Roy and the head, while at the same time delving into the past history of the both of them. Could a clue from the past help Roy turn the tide?

It is an interesting novel in that it gives an insight into a world that I would never be part of. Some of the motivations seem a bit odd to me. One in particular, It seems to me that the scandal of sexual abuse and thus dragging the good name of the school through the mud is a a far greater crime than actually carrying out the abuse. The word "tolerated" keeps popping into mind. Which is food for thought. 

  • Selected Quotes...
I don't believe God really cares what you eat, or what you wear, or whom you love. I think that if God made the stars, He must have a greater perspective.”

All schools have their skeletons. St Oswald’s is no exception. Most of the time, we try our best to keep them in the closet. But this time, the only recourse we have is to throw open all the closets, light as many bulbs as we can and catch the vermin as it comes out.

They change the sky, not their souls, that run across the ocean.

Progress through tradition

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  • About The Author...

Joanne Harris (OBE, FRSL) is the internationally renowned and award-winning author of over twenty novels, plus novellas, cookbooks, scripts, short stories, libretti, lyrics, articles, and a self-help book for writers, TEN THINGS ABOUT WRITING. In 2000, her 1999 novel CHOCOLAT was adapted to the screen, starring Juliette Binoche and Johnny Depp. She holds honorary doctorates from the Universities of Sheffield and Huddersfield, is an honorary Fellow of St Catharine's College, Cambridge, and a Fellow of the Royal Society of Literature.


Her hobbies are listed in Who's Who as 'mooching, lounging, strutting, strumming, priest-baiting and quiet subversion of the system'. She is active on social media, where she writes stories and gives writing tips as @joannechocolat; she posts writing seminars on YouTube; she performs in a live music and storytelling show with the #Storytime Band; and she works from a shed in her garden at her home in Yorkshire.

She also has a form of synaesthesia which enables her to smell colours. Red, she says, smells of chocolate..

The Look by Lee Coates

 

270 pages
Rating... 3⭐
You can buy The Look...Here
You can find out more about Lee Coates...Here

  • The Blurb...

Jim is a self-employed web developer living in Cardiff. Successful professionally, the future also looks rosy for his personal life, having recently proposed to his girlfriend, Ffion. However, when the couple decide to celebrate their engagement with his much-loved dad, Callum, Jim’s world is tilted on its axis.

Jim is convinced he spotted his dad staring at him – just for a split second – with a look of pure hatred. Did he imagine it? However, when a series of bizarre and catastrophic events strike Jim’s life in quick succession, he starts to wonder if the look he received from his father could mean something.

Eventually, Callum makes a confession that will lead to the total collapse of Jim’s life as he knows it…


  • Our Review...
I read this novel as part of the 52 books in 52 weeks challenge. For more info click here. This weeks prompt was a novel whose blurb you hadn't read prior to reading. 

The Look is an intriguing and attention holding first novel by Lee Coates, which augers well for future projects. The story is a cross between The Wicker Man and The Omen but set in the very middle class and pretentious Cardiff Bay.  It leaves you with an itch you want to scratch.. Partly because of the ending and partly due to the structure. 

The first half of the book is Jim and Callum's back story. However the main driver for the plot isn't introduced until 70% of the way into the book.. This leaves little time then for the second and third acts. The narrative felt a little front end heavy. A few potential plot strands are laid down but not followed. e.g. the mysterious potential employers, the missing mother, even The Look of the title.  If they are false trails they should still be followed and answered in the climax of the book. As I was hungrily devouring the final chapters I distinctly recall thinking There's only a few pages left, he has got a lot of strands to pull together to get a satisfactory end. 

This is a dark horror/supernatural story that somehow doesn't feel too dark despite some really horrific scenes. I've been wracking my brains as to why it feels 99% but not quite 100%, because as I've said the scenes which are intended to be horrific are indeed very horrific (gonna cancel my opticians appointment! 😟). So not the scenes then. I sort of came gradually to the idea (and this is difficult to articulate for me.) that it feels to me (with the usual caveat, that my opinion is irrelevant) that the authors writing style is slightly out of sync with what he is trying to achieve. I wrote in my notes. " Authors style is light and bouncy, with a use of vocabulary that is varied. It is engaging and just on the right side of the entertaining/verbose border."(see first selected quote for an example.) When reading the narrative it felt sort of...perky. Unlike when I read Cormac McCarthy which makes me feel dread and despair. However I don't know if this perky/bouncy fits with theme of the book.. Like using a precision scalpel, when the job needs a lump hammer.

By the by, one thing that did make the hairs on the back of my old swede jump up. The neighbour in the book is called Steven Staite. Very unusual name. However it was also the name of my neighbour for the first 22years of my life! arrggghhh!!!

There is a lot to admire in this debut novel.
One point which I did think worked out well was that it was written in the !st person from Jim's point of view. Given the (possible) revealing ending, this was a well placed strategy. In addition the author does have a well developed turn of phrase and some of his descriptive lines are very juicy indeed, see selected quotes. With just a few well turned words he can make pictures in your mind.
All in all, I found the novel entertaining and an excellent first step on what will hopefully be a long writing career. It's a good start. He has all the ducks, in this first attempt, next one to line em all up, and knock em dead.

  • Selected Quotes...
I can't imagine there was any grisly facet of the atrocities that wasn't overseen by an impromptu documentarian. Anyone with a ghoulish curiosity could easily find out what was happening at any point in the continuum and at most locations within the marquee.

The bruised and pendulous clouds above had descended further,

...the sky was a watercolour artist's paradise, pregnant with varicose-veined purples.

I struggled to comprehend how every single car on display had at least one occupant with their own life and innumerable worries. Some concerns would be major. Others less so. But each and every individual was expected to cope with the constant state of flux inflicted on them from an exponential number of outside influences. Billions of particles inexorably linked by gossamer thin threads. The world was such a complex place. Chaotic.

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Audrey Rose by Frank D Fellita

  • About The Author..

After having two kids, Lee Coates had almost given up on ever fulfilling his dream of writing a novel, spare time being so precious. However, a light-bulb moment occurred during one of his sons’ extracurricular activities. These interminable minutes needn’t be dead time. Lee can be regularly found writing at the side of football pitches, swimming pools and tennis courts in his hometown of Cardiff.